Pick my Path makes an enthused by writer!

Kids really enthused about writing today through the new idea "pick my path' LI: using a flow chart to plan a piece of writing. Problems?

• Generating ideas

ONGOING AS WE SPEAK MORE TO COME

11.5.2016

Now kids have achieved the flow chart next simple step (deciding to really break down the task), was to add interesting vocab. Modelled by using a sentence from MD's plan and class helped add more interesting words for the reader.

• we used thesaurus and Word Hippo

We are doing this step as we publish or on our plans - celbrated changes by some sharing ideas from what they changed them fro to. D O'N  loved sharing his ideas so did some of my other boys...feeling successful.

E.C breaking his up into small tasks - he now needs to add detail by adding more than one sentence as in some slides he has.