Target Writer Successes with storybird

Here is a fabulous first chapter from a very enthusiastic writer who is now enjoying writing. He even was using inferencing as a writer to suggest one of the characters was shy or nervous by making the character stutter. He used speech marks correctly. My feedforward was new speaker on a line and he promptly corrected this as he went. He also reread and changed the characters names as it wasn't quite making sense. Awesome app!!